[Olympus] Talk for PANIC 2014

[Douglas K Hasell]

Hi Dmitry,

	Looks good.  A few general comments:

slide 3 - there is a big space in the middle of some pieces of text e.g. the last item.  Use left justified text and/or insert carriage returns to force the line breaks

slide 4 - put a carriage return before rel-ative to force it to a new line

slide 6 - put percent sign after the number

slide 7 - acceptance does depend on lepton and field but is the same for opposite combinations

slide 13 - I don't think your equation is correct.  As written it implies

 (++)/(-+) = (+-)/(--) 

and looking at the angle acceptance plot on slide 7 I would assume

 (++)/(-+) red/green = black/blue (--)/(+-)

slide 13 - I am not sure how useful this plot is in any case.  Certainly it is only valid over the range 11.5 to 12.8 degrees.  Beyond this the angular acceptance is not adequately covered by all combinations.  Can you explain the slope?

You need a slide comparing SYMB and SC or SYMB and 12 degree.  Otherwise you can't say there is good agreement between all monitors in your summary since you don't show a comparison with the SYMB.

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                                                            Douglas

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On Aug 12, 2014, at 2:03 PM, Dmitry Khaneft <khaneftd at kph.uni-mainz.de> wrote:

> Dear Colleagues,
> 
> attached you will find my talk for the upcoming PANIC 2014. My talk, 
> concentrated on the luminosity measurements, will follow that of Akopov 
> Norair who will presentan update on the OLYMPUS experiment. Any comments 
> concerning both content and english are welcome.
> 
> Best regards,
> Dmitry
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