[Habitat Exec] Letters to sponsors for Beaver Dash

[Jacinda Shelly]

I actually like the idea of the different ranks of sponsors.  It makes the
event look that much more professional.  It's perfectly in line with events
like the Career Fair and other organizations on campus.  I might eliminate
the "undergraduate student" part of the letter since I don't think it adds
any value to the letter.  It seems much stronger to me to just say "writing
to you as the President of the..."

My two cents.

Hope everyone's having a great summer!
Jacinda

On Thu, Jul 23, 2009 at 1:34 PM, Grace Lee <gracelee at mit.edu> wrote:

> Hi guys,
>
> Could you look over the letter (attached) that I wrote, asking Shaws to be
> a sponsor of the 5K?  I'm planning on sending similar letters to the other
> companies that we brainstormed would be good sponsors.  I established
> different ranks of sponsors - I dunno if that's too blunt.
>
> Anyway, let me know your suggestions!
>
> Thanks :)
> Grace
>
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