[Olympus] Abstract for DNP Vancouver

[Robert P Redwine]

Dear Colton,

     Overall looks good.  My one suggestion is to modify the last sentence in the main body as follows:

Data were collected with an integrated luminosity of over 4.0 fb-1 using a ….

     Thanks,

     Bob

> On Jun 16, 2016, at 8:31 AM, Colton David O'Connor <colton at mit.edu> wrote:
> 
> Hi All,
> 
> Please see my draft abstract, attached.  This is for a short contributed talk to be given at DNP Vancouver in October.  I have left it rather plain and broad.  I welcome any comments or suggestions that you might have.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> -Colton
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