[Cidrz] Final Poster

[Gari Clifford]

Leo,

did you find a CIDRZ logo for the poster and presentation? I made the
attached from their website.

-G

On Sun, May 4, 2008 at 3:48 PM, Gari Clifford <gari.clifford at gmail.com>
wrote:

> sorry about that phone call Leo - you were cracking up - I couldn't hear
> you very well, and then dropped the call.
> Anyway - hope the suggestions are useful - just wanted to catch you before
> you printed it.
> Feel free to use them or not - it's up to you - you're the boss :)
> -G
>
>
> On Sun, May 4, 2008 at 3:45 PM, Gari Clifford <gari.clifford at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> > Hi Leo,
> >
> > looks great apart from the last box - the grammar is a little mixed up I
> > think.
> > You have written:
> >
> > "Once a large database of cervical images *has *accumulated that are
> > linked to both diagnoses that *have *been QA'd and clinical outcomes, it
> > is *likely possible* to come up with artificial intelligence tools that
> > can classify images of indeterminate cervical lesions, further reducing the
> > need for specialist support."
> >
> > I would use
> >
> > "Once a large database of cervical images with associated clinical
> > outcomes and other pertinent medical data has accumulated and been QA'd, it
> > is likely that artificial intelligence tools can be used to classify images
> > of indeterminate cervical lesions and provide real-time QA, further reducing
> > the need for specialist support."
> >
> > Also, the next sentence doesn't make sense: "Although this software
> > application was initially developed to facilitate cervical cancer screening,
> > this software application can be used for longitudinal care of patients who
> > live in remote areas, especially if visual inspection is crucial in their
> > clinical monitoring, such as in dermatology and wound care."
> >
> > First - I would change "this software" to "our software" to make it
> > clear that you are talking about the existing software rather than the AI
> > classifier you refer to in the preceding sentence.
> > Then, it still reads a little oddly. How about:
> >
> > "Although initially developed to facilitate cervical cancer screening,
> > our software application has a general applicability for the longitudinal
> > care of patients who live in remote areas, particularly for medical problems
> > where visual inspection is crucial for a patient's ongoing clinical
> > evaluation, such as for skin cancer, dermatology and wound care."
> >
> > -G
> >
> > 2008/5/4 Leo Anthony Celi <leoanthonyceli at yahoo.com>:
> >
> > >
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> > >
> >
> >
> > --
> > G. D. Clifford, PhD, SMIEEE
> > Principal Research Scientist,
> > Massachusetts Institute of Technology,
> > Instructor in Biomedical Engineering, HST,
> > (Harvard-MIT Division of Health Sciences & Technology)
> > Engineering Manager for the L.C.P. at M.I.T.
> > (Laboratory for Computational Physiology),
> > Rm E25-505DA, 45 Carleton St., Cambridge MA 02142
> > Tel: +16172537937 / +448444368530
> > Fax: +16172587859 email: gari at alum.mit.edu
> > http://alum.mit.edu/www/gari
>
>
>
>
> --
> G. D. Clifford, PhD, SMIEEE
> Principal Research Scientist,
> Massachusetts Institute of Technology,
> Instructor in Biomedical Engineering, HST,
> (Harvard-MIT Division of Health Sciences & Technology)
> Engineering Manager for the L.C.P. at M.I.T.
> (Laboratory for Computational Physiology),
> Rm E25-505DA, 45 Carleton St., Cambridge MA 02142
> Tel: +16172537937 / +448444368530
> Fax: +16172587859 email: gari at alum.mit.edu
> http://alum.mit.edu/www/gari
>



-- 
G. D. Clifford, PhD, SMIEEE
Principal Research Scientist,
Massachusetts Institute of Technology,
Instructor in Biomedical Engineering, HST,
(Harvard-MIT Division of Health Sciences & Technology)
Engineering Manager for the L.C.P. at M.I.T.
(Laboratory for Computational Physiology),
Rm E25-505DA, 45 Carleton St., Cambridge MA 02142
Tel: +16172537937 / +448444368530
Fax: +16172587859 email: gari at alum.mit.edu
http://alum.mit.edu/www/gari
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